diff --git a/moderncv/Pedro_Cabral_CV_moderncv.tex b/moderncv/Pedro_Cabral_CV_moderncv.tex
index cf38273..c36256e 100644
--- a/moderncv/Pedro_Cabral_CV_moderncv.tex
+++ b/moderncv/Pedro_Cabral_CV_moderncv.tex
@@ -66,17 +66,14 @@
 
 \section{About me}
 
-Software developer specializing in PHP, Laravel, and WordPress, building reliable, scalable, and maintainable web applications.
-
-\bigskip % bigger gap between main blocks
-
-I believe there are no stupid questions — only opportunities to learn, improve, and build better things together.
+I believe there are no stupid questions --- only opportunities to learn, improve, and build better things together.
 
 \bigskip % bigger gap before Personal section
 
-When I'm not coding, you'll usually find me being the caretaker and entertainer of my two lovely kids. I try to be the best husband, father, friend, colleague, and neighbour I can be.
+When I'm not coding, you'll usually find me taking care of and entertaining my two lovely kids.
 
 \medskip % slightly smaller gap within Personal block
 
-I also love singing, acting, and playing the didgeridoo; football and table tennis; good food and wine; the beach; and chopping wood. I start every morning with a cold shower (or an ice bath when temperatures drop below zero).
+I also love singing, acting, playing the didgeridoo, and chopping wood. I regularly take cold showers (or ice baths when temperatures drop below zero) in the morning.
+
 \end{document}